My english competence

Batchillerat has finished and now that I look back I have to say that it has been six years of a lot of work and exams but the work has been worth it. Today in this post, I want to talk about my English progress since the first composition to the last that I've done.

The first composition that I have done in this blog was an email to my teacher:

"Hello, I’m Laura Saus, I’m 16 and I live in Castelló d’Empúries. Since I was little I've been studying in Castelló, I've never  gone to another school.  I live in Castelló with my parents and my brother Pau. I have one dog and his name is Max and two turtles too. I have loved theatre and dancing since I was little but I can't do it now because I need time to my studies. The last year i went to medium group of English, and this year I go to the first group and i hope to learn a lot of english"

And the last composition that I've done is a yoursay about an amazing day at bcn with my friends:

"Last month I went to Miley's concert and it was amazing. I love Miley Cyrus's songs and I was super excited to go. I achived the last tickets thanks to my mum who went to Barcelona to buy them. The concert was in Barcelona, it started at 6 pm and I was there at 5 o'clock. The entrance was full of people and the queue was the longest that I had ever seen. At 5 o'clock we began to get in Palau Sant Jordi, the building where the concert had to take place, I went with all my friends. The place was so big and full of lights and amazing things for the concert.  The best moment was when she appeared on the stage, all the lights turned on and she started to sing. When the concert finished we took the car and we returned home. I was so tired and the only thing that I wanted was to go to bed, but unfortunately we had a lot of problems to go home. When we were returning, in spite of that it was amazing day and I wouldn't change it for anything"

The difference between these two posts I think is very big, in the first one I use to use very few connectors and a very poor vocabulary. The sentences that I did were so short and all of them were so simple, althought with time I have improved, not a lot but the necesssary and now I think that I'm able to write a good composition using the most as possible connectors, and I try to introduce new vocabulary in my compositions.

Now that I have done the differences between my first write and the last one I want to tell to you wich is my favourite post and wich was the presentation that I did better.

About the writing I think that one of the best post that I've done is the one that I done about my friends. I think that this is one of the best writings that I've done because despite that I don't like a lot to show my feelings this was a topic that I love to write about, because my friends are so important in my life. More over the day that I wrote this post I was so inspired and when I'm like this I use to write in English because I feel like I know more English than what I really know.

About the best oral presentation I would say that was one presentation that I did in first of batxillerat and was about drugs. I did the presentation with my friends Caspin and Artiom and I was so nervous and so shy. I think that this one was my best presentation because I didn't look at the paper much and I tried to talk looking at the eyes of the people and I got the best mark of all the presentations that I've done.

All in all, now that I have all of this has finished the only thing that I want to say is that althought this years has caused me a lot of stress I have learnt a lot and I hope that in my "new life" the next year all goes as good as always..